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yomagic
Joey Serrano
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Basement
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sup guys, just made a video cause i was bored and felt like doing it. Tricks arent the best but I tried lol. I focused on the overall feel and editing of the video. comments, critism, advice all welcome. (just not to get anyone confused) I am not sponsored by VSNYYC
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« Last Edit: August 05, 2010, 07:28:17 PM by yomagic »
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Raekwonx
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great video whats the song  and artist?
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Duncan is only going to move in on real threats like a different company infringing upon their copyright. Brandon Jackson isn't going to appear out of thin air and swat your Aerial mid-trick. -fallenangemon
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samurai4321
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I'm Back ;)
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Good stuff. One thing, you do that pinwheel thing at the beginning of most/all of your tricks. Its cool, but it gets a bit repetitive.
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yomagic
Joey Serrano
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great video whats the song  and artist? yea the video is acting weird. i had credits at the end but i dont know why its all funky The song is Sofa King by DJ danger mouse Good stuff. One thing, you do that pinwheel thing at the beginning of most/all of your tricks. Its cool, but it gets a bit repetitive.
its not a trick at all its such a habit. just like people throw weird like leo and stuff its a habit i do not meant to be part of the trick
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Heath
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but can it spark?
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pretty sweet video  was that that one B Grade Sky Walker with the raw half? i really liked the vibe the video gave. the location made me feel like you were either hiding during a nuclear holocaust or about to perform an exorcism
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yomagic
Joey Serrano
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pretty sweet video  was that that one B Grade Sky Walker with the raw half? i really liked the vibe the video gave. the location made me feel like you were either hiding during a nuclear holocaust or about to perform an exorcism thanks heath!!! and yea kinda. it was half of a raw Cgrade and half blue Bgrade. Both together = SMOOTH
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yomagic
Joey Serrano
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fixed the video
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202andrew
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Great Job Joey! Tricks were slick and rockin the skywalker 
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The overall vibe from this video was surreal and entrancing, I loved it. The editing was well done, it went nice with the music. Maybe you could have added some filler shots? The tricks were good thorough tricks, very well performed and difficult to execute but... They're not to my taste. Keep on doing your thing though, mad respect. 
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yomagic
Joey Serrano
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Thanks andrew. @ reggie- thanks alot for the kind words. What are filler shots though? What about my tricks werent your taste? I like the comments im getting and all i do is take them in and grow better
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Thanks andrew. @ reggie- thanks alot for the kind words. What are filler shots though? What about my tricks werent your taste? I like the comments im getting and all i do is take them in and grow better
If you want me to be blunt. You're a good yoyoer, but your technical skill alone isn't enough. You're being held back by a lack of innovation / a specific style. The video is cool, the yoyoing is rather dull at some points. It just seems like generic, difficult yoyoing. I think the next step would be learning to really apply yourself to your yoyoing. What you do is great stuff and it's hard, but it goes much deeper. It's a sense of trick maturity that comes with time I guess. Each has his own timer. Sorry if I sound like a ----, I'm not trying to. You're good, I probably can't do all of those tricks. I'm just trying to be an elitist. 
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yomagic
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Thanks for the critism reggie. Not everyone would be blunt about critism and respectful at the same time. I get what you mean though however i would consider my tricks hard at all lol. I do wish that i had the creativity and skill to come up with new and innovative tricks/combos. Ive been yoyoing for 3 years and i feel like creativity and trick complexity is lacking and it just hard to come up with new stuff
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Word man, just don't forget your initial point. To have fun playing with a toy.
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yomagic
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yomagic
Joey Serrano
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any other comments or critisms?
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yoyofr3ak
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Hey Joey, was that blue half mine?  My comments... Smooth, very smooth. Some pretty good stuff in there, I do agree that the pinwheel thing does get repetitive but hey, a lot of people do it, including myself. I think if you focus more on making really excelent and innovative tricks, you'll make even better videos in the future, which I am really looking forward to.
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Guy sells your mom a fake Louis Viton Purse. Your mom discovers it's fake a few weeks later. You ask her if it works.
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yomagic
Joey Serrano
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Hey Joey, was that blue half mine?  My comments... Smooth, very smooth. Some pretty good stuff in there, I do agree that the pinwheel thing does get repetitive but hey, a lot of people do it, including myself. I think if you focus more on making really excelent and innovative tricks, you'll make even better videos in the future, which I am really looking forward to. yea the blue half was yours. i switched it back to full blue (its my main thow) and thanks for the comments
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