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Topic: My six month yoyo video I want your feedback!! (Read 363 times)
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yoyofool
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Battosai: conqueror of the string.
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Sorry for the grainyness stupid Windows movie maker lol, Anyway All but the third trick are combos/tricks I have made up they arnt amazing but I feel decent about where I am. These arnt the only tricks I know btw just the ones I had time to throw up real quick. Constructive critiscim always wanted. Thanks oh and Ill Do Trick Tutorials By Request! Steeley http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ndfXdB2pcl4 (External Embedding Disabled) |
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« Last Edit: August 01, 2010, 07:37:39 PM by yoyofool »
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Tetrahedron
CLYW Assistant
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All them assembling.
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Very good for 6 months, I would say.
I started a month ago but only had a total play time of like... 2 hours max so I can't even do any of that.
Oh university life, how I love you.
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yoyofool
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Battosai: conqueror of the string.
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Thanks man and yah I know how the school life is! lol
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samurai4321
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I'm Back ;)
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Anyways, good tricks. Really smooth, they have a nice speed and flow. My advice is to try to use some more "complex" trick elements. Maybe a whip here, a laceration there, I think you get the point. Start looking at freestyles are trying to pay attention to how professionals aply those moves to their tricks.
The only criticism I have is about the editing. When recording yourself, try to give some time after you walk away from the camera and some time after you finish the trick. Then, when you go to edit, you can cut off the part when you walk to and from the camera without losing and precious tricks.
Good job, and I'm looking forward to seeing more from you in the future.
Samurai.
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Heath
"The Works" works
Manufacturer
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but can it spark?
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REALLY good for 6 months
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 http://s722.photobucket.com/albums/ww228/hvizier/ |
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yoyofool
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Battosai: conqueror of the string.
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Anyways, good tricks. Really smooth, they have a nice speed and flow. My advice is to try to use some more "complex" trick elements. Maybe a whip here, a laceration there, I think you get the point. Start looking at freestyles are trying to pay attention to how professionals aply those moves to their tricks. The only criticism I have is about the editing. When recording yourself, try to give some time after you walk away from the camera and some time after you finish the trick. Then, when you go to edit, you can cut off the part when you walk to and from the camera without losing and precious tricks. Good job, and I'm looking forward to seeing more from you in the future. Samurai. Thank you very much Samurai! REALLY good for 6 months
Also thank you too Heath, I hope to get a yoyo from you here soon! |
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« Last Edit: August 02, 2010, 12:07:17 PM by yoyofool »
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yoyofool
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Battosai: conqueror of the string.
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I would say I put roughly 15 hours a week into practice. This is usually at nights when I dont have much else to do and after work. I dont play video like I used to so yoyoing took the place of that really.
Thanks
Steeley
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Paulleh
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Man, that was REALLY good for 6 months.  I've been throwing for about a year and a half, and you're almost better than me. I can never get my tricks to look that smooth. |
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Jake-Austin
Guess what. What? I cant tell you.
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Not bad at all. Keep working explore other styles also, |
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yoyofool
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Battosai: conqueror of the string.
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Thanks guys. Ive always dug 5a so I think Ill start taking that up!
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