Hatrick (comments really appreciated)

[202andrew]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BToBYTOz89I (External Embedding Disabled) Hi guys this is my new video. I would really like some critisism and comments to tell me what to improve. I hope you guys like it.

[beatboxer2013]

SOo yeah i'm gonna say what i always do...smoothen it out...the tricks are pretty awesome actually i see element's worth stealing...but smoothen it out (and get longer shorts)

[nick-m]

you are a lot smoother now, but you still need to work a little bit on smoothness.

i like the behind the back combo at :49, along with a lot of other tricks.

[202andrew]

you are a lot smoother now, but you still need to work a little bit on smoothness.

i like the behind the back combo at :49, along with a lot of other tricks.

thanks, Yeah I will work on smoothing my tricks out before my next video.

[202andrew]

SOo yeah i'm gonna say what i always do...smoothen it out...the tricks are pretty awesome actually i see element's worth stealing...but smoothen it out (and get longer shorts)

lol all the other shorts are in the wash. I grew lol.

[Gsteller]

You get better and better every video. Great stuff. Yeah, I would recommend trying to do all these tricks responsive, thats what I did to smoothen out, and it worked well for me. Once you find your style, and you smoothen these out, you'll be one the next big younger throwers. Great job man, can't wait to see what comes next.

-G

[YomasterJon]

Great stuff, like others said work on smoothing it all out. Keep up the great work!

[202andrew]

Great stuff, like others said work on smoothing it all out. Keep up the great work!

thanks. I will definatly try smoothing out.

[202andrew]

You get better and better every video. Great stuff. Yeah, I would recommend trying to do all these tricks responsive, thats what I did to smoothen out, and it worked well for me. Once you find your style, and you smoothen these out, you'll be one the next big younger throwers. Great job man, can't wait to see what comes next.

-G

thanks graeme, it means a lot! your a big inspiration.

[beatboxer2013]

I'm gonna comment again because i thought just occurred to me....you smoothen these trick out you very well could be a new zach gormley!

[202andrew]

I'm gonna comment again because i thought just occurred to me....you smoothen these trick out you very well could be a new zach gormley!

wow that is so nice you just seriously made me almost cry lol. Still thanks a lot!!!!!! zach g is the best!!!

[beatboxer2013]

now don't get me wrong you have got a ways to go but you are on your way to being really really good

[202andrew]

now don't get me wrong you have got a ways to go but you are on your way to being really really good

thanks!