Rollin' Over (new combo need advice)

[IanPkmnYo]

New combo I came up with.  Besides smoothing it out, it there anything I could add or improve?  Thanks a lot!

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[Jacob Deffenbaugh]

I would say use less slack, and find ways to "condense" the trick (don't go back to a Trapeze, but find a "techy" shortcut between the mounts that you use already).

But that's the 2002 player of me talking.

-Jacob

[SkareCrow96]

Honestly Ian, it looks awesome. Jacobs right though. Smooth it out and tweak the fillers a bit and you got yourself an awesome trick. On a sarcastic note you should finish it off with what I like to call a "cool guy bind" If your at a loss and dont know what that is, just check out Gentrys vid with yoyo skills and you will

[IanPkmnYo]

Thanks, guys! for some reason lately, every little critique has been helping and inspiring me, so I really appreciate it.